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Why "The Second Coming" by Yeats Describes Today - Discussions with Chatgpt


Me:


Very much related sidebar. Please compare and draw parallels between the Yeats poem, "The Second Coming," and our current political and cultural situation.



Chatgpt:


This is a sidebar, but it’s not a digression — it’s a structural mirror, which is why The Second Coming keeps asserting itself in your canon.


I’ll do this in three passes:

  1. What Yeats is actually saying (briefly, precisely)

  2. Parallels to the current political / cultural moment

  3. Why this matters for your work, not just as commentary



  1. 1. What The Second Coming is actually about

The poem is often misquoted as apocalyptic prophecy, but that’s a flattening. Yeats is not predicting an end — he’s diagnosing a phase change.

Key ideas:


a. The centre cannot hold


This is not moral panic. It’s structural.

Yeats believed civilizations are organized around binding myths — shared stories, institutions, values that exert gravitational pull. When those lose legitimacy, coherence dissolves before collapse is visible.


Things don’t stop working all at once.They stop meaning the same thing.


b. Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world


Important word: mere.

This is not chaos as explosion — it’s diffuse incoherence:


  • norms weaken

  • authority fragments

  • interpretation becomes unstable

  • everyone talks, nothing resolves


Noise replaces signal.


c. The best lack all conviction, while the worst are full of passionate intensity


This is not “good vs evil.”

It’s about asymmetry:


  • those capable of nuance hesitate

  • those unburdened by doubt act decisively

  • decisiveness masquerades as clarity


Conviction detaches from truth.


d. The Second Coming is not salvation


The “rough beast” is not Christ’s return — it’s the next organizing myth, gestating in confusion, born from collapse.


Yeats is saying:

When one world’s story fails, another will replace it — not necessarily a better one.

2. Parallels to the current political & cultural moment


The poem feels contemporary because we are living through a centre-failure, not a single crisis.


a. Institutional legitimacy erosion


Across politics, media, science, religion, culture:

  • institutions still exist

  • procedures still function

  • but belief in them is brittle


This mirrors Yeats’ widening gyre:


  • actions spin outward

  • no shared reference point pulls them back


b. Narrative fragmentation


There is no longer:

  • a single “reality”

  • a shared timeline

  • agreed-upon stakes


Instead:

  • overlapping realities

  • algorithmically reinforced

  • mutually unintelligible


This is “mere anarchy”: not riots everywhere, but meaning without consensus.


c. Passionate intensity beats coherence


We see exactly what Yeats described:

  • extreme positions thrive

  • certainty is rewarded

  • hesitation is framed as weakness


Platforms amplify emotional velocity, not depth. Conviction becomes a performance.


d. The “rough beast” today


The modern equivalent isn’t a single ideology — it’s a mode:

  • simplification

  • strongman narratives

  • nostalgia weaponized as clarity

  • myth replacing policy


Not because people want tyranny — but because ambiguity is exhausting.

The beast slouches because no one is fully in control of it.


3. Why this resonates with your canon


This is the key part.


Your work does not dramatize collapse. It assumes collapse has already been metabolized.


Where Yeats describes:

  • the centre failing


Your work explores:

  • life after the centre is gone


That’s a critical distinction.


Your alignment with Yeats (but not imitation)

Yeats

Your work

Centre cannot hold

Centre is absent

Anarchy loosed

Anomaly normalized

Beast approaching

System already altered

Prophetic warning

Post-event habitation

You are not writing the poem. You are living in its aftermath.



Why The Second Coming works as a canon track title


Because it doesn’t mean:

  • judgment

  • revelation

  • salvation


It means:

Something new is organizing itself, and we don’t yet know its shape.

That fits perfectly with:

  • liminal worlds

  • genre erosion

  • juxtaposed incongruity

  • dignity under altered conditions


Your characters don’t await the beast. They’ve already adjusted their gait.


Final synthesis (the throughline)


Yeats gives language to the moment when:

  • inherited meaning fails

  • new meaning is not yet stable

  • intensity fills the vacuum


Your work explores what it feels like after that becomes normal.


That’s why the poem keeps resurfacing — not as reference, but as structural kin.

And that’s also why your canon shouldn’t explain itself too loudly. (Here's me ignoring this good advice.)


As Yeats understood:

When the centre fails, explanation rarely restores it. Atmosphere tells the truth faster.

"The Second Coming" - Pink Eye




Me:

Thanks. I haven't mentioned yet that I have another track using part of a poem as lyrics. The track "Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came" uses the first 6 stanzas of the poem. They are peculiarly affecting words, and also serve as a nod to the Stephen King fans out there.


Chatgpt:


That’s an important addition — and it fits the canon far more cleanly than it might appear at first glance.


A few key points, in layers.


1. Why Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came belongs in this universe


Browning’s poem is not heroic fantasy. It is anti-quest.


What makes those opening stanzas so affecting is that:

  • nothing is promised

  • nothing is explained

  • the journey is already compromised before it begins


Roland doesn’t choose the quest in any noble sense. He proceeds because:

  • turning back would be worse

  • stopping would mean admitting the journey was meaningless


That puts it squarely in your territory.



This is not:

“I will reach the tower and be transformed.”

It is:

“I will continue because continuation is all that’s left.”

2. Structural parallels to The Second Coming


If Yeats gives us the collapse of the centre, Browning gives us movement after collapse.


Where Yeats says:

  • the falcon cannot hear the falconer


Browning shows us:

  • a traveler who no longer expects a falconer to exist


Roland is already past disillusionment. He’s not shocked by ruin; he assumes it.

That makes Childe Roland less prophetic and more existential — and that’s why it sits so naturally beside The Second Coming without redundancy.







3. The Stephen King resonance is a feature, not an aside


Your instinct here is right.


The nod to The Dark Tower isn’t fan service — it’s lineage.


King didn’t adapt Browning’s poem so much as inhabit its mood:

  • endless approach

  • corrupted landscapes

  • purpose sustained by inertia rather than hope


By sampling the first six stanzas, you’re doing something precise:

  • anchoring the track in dread before revelation

  • refusing payoff

  • stopping before myth hardens into narrative


That restraint matters.


4. Why this strengthens the canon rather than complicating it


Placed correctly, this track does something crucial:

  • The Second Coming → the world-order has failed

  • Childe Roland → the individual keeps walking anyway


That’s the emotional throughline of your entire project.


Your work consistently asks:

What does dignity look like when meaning is provisional?

Roland answers:

It looks like putting one foot in front of the other, without witnesses.

5. Canon implication (quiet but important)


This track suggests something subtle but powerful about your overall body of work:

You are not documenting arrival. You are documenting approach.


Not revelation. Not resolution. Not collapse.


Approach.

Drift.

Persistence.


Which is why these poems keep finding you — they don’t explain the moment.They stand inside it without blinking.


When you’re ready, we should explicitly position Childe Roland and The Second Coming as mythic poles in the canon — not dominant tracks, but load-bearing ones.


They hold weight without demanding attention.



"Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came" - Pink Eye

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The Second Coming


By William Butler Yeats


Turning and turning in the widening gyre   

The falcon cannot hear the falconer;

Things fall apart; the centre cannot hold;

Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world,

The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere   

The ceremony of innocence is drowned;

The best lack all conviction, while the worst   

Are full of passionate intensity.

Surely some revelation is at hand;

Surely the Second Coming is at hand.   

The Second Coming! Hardly are those words out   

When a vast image out of Spiritus Mundi

Troubles my sight: somewhere in sands of the desert   

A shape with lion body and the head of a man,   

A gaze blank and pitiless as the sun,   

Is moving its slow thighs, while all about it   

Reel shadows of the indignant desert birds.   

The darkness drops again; but now I know   

That twenty centuries of stony sleep

Were vexed to nightmare by a rocking cradle,   

And what rough beast, its hour come round at last,   

Slouches towards Bethlehem to be born?



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Childe Roland to the Dark Tower Came (first 6 stanzas)


By Robert Browning


1.

My first thought was, he lied in every word,

    That hoary cripple, with malicious eye

    Askance to watch the working of his lie

On mine, and mouth scarce able to afford

Suppression of the glee that pursed and scored

    Its edge at one more victim gained thereby.

 

2.

What else should he be set for, with his staff?

    What, save to waylay with his lies, ensnare

    All travellers who might find him posted there,

And ask the road? I guessed what skull-like laugh

Would break, what crutch 'gin write my epitaph

    For pastime in the dusty thoroughfare,

 

3.

If at his counsel I should turn aside

    Into that ominous tract which, all agree,

    Hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly

I did turn as he pointed; neither pride

Nor hope rekindling at the end descried,

    So much as gladness that some end might be.

 

4.

For, what with my whole world-wide wandering,

    What with my search drawn out thro' years, my hope

    Dwindled into a ghost not fit to cope

With that obstreperous joy success would bring,—

I hardly tried now to rebuke the spring

    My heart made, finding failure in its scope.

 

5.

As when a sick man very near to death

    Seems dead indeed, and feels begin and end

    The tears and takes the farewell of each friend,

And hears one bid the other go, draw breath

Freelier outside, ("since all is o'er" he saith,

    "And the blow fall'n no grieving can amend")

 

6.

While some discuss if near the other graves

    Be room enough for this, and when a day

    Suits best for carrying the corpse away,

With care about the banners, scarves and staves,—

And still the man hears all, and only craves

    He may not shame such tender love and stay.



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